09. HMD meme

[k_squared_mods]

☑ HOW'S MY DRIVING MEME

All of us have those moments where we are uncertain about our characterization. Sometimes feedback is the best medicine! So, step on up and post your roleplay accounts and the games you have them in. Let others come by and tell you how you're doing and let others know what you think! Give legitimate reasons and not just "I love you!" Save that for our monthly love memes.


     » Anon is enabled but do not abuse it!
     » Don't circlejerk.
     » Flaming will not be tolerated, play nicely!
     » Remember to give critique

!PLEASE READ: There have been instances of anon bullying & threats in both the HMD and Love memes, so we wanted to stress how important it is that you bring this to us if it happens. Don't ignore something just because you think it's "too small" to bring to us.


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**The basic formatting of this meme was borrowed from hmd_me

Comments

[sarah_sheep]

@ hollyheights

Madoka Kyouno | Lagrange: The Flower of Rin-ne | voxaura

@ mayfield_rpg

Mana Ryougi | Kara no Kyoukai | knowsabout
Kasen Ibaraki | Touhou Project| hermits
Sion Eltnam Atlasia | Tsukihime / Melty Blood | atlasia


@ bakerstreet / currently apping

Eri Mizutani | The Idolm@ster | nuko
Rintarō Okabe | Steins;Gate | timecrowave <- app'd to Asgard

[kuritsun]

SINCE YOU ARE ASKING FOR CRIT... This isn't really a matter of ic/oocness, but I do think that your writing/grammar skills could use a bit of work. It seems like you drop commas a lot where they're needed, so your tags can get a bit run-on-sentency (that's not a word but I just made it up OKAY!!) Spelling errors, too, but that's more of an individual basis thing - not anything dramatic, just stuff like separating compound words that should be one word, etc. I'm a huge spelling and grammar nazi, so I can't help but notice. weh.

I also wouldn't mind seeing more thought process and/or emotion in your tags. I've only really played with Okabe, of course, but I think he's a pretty layered character, and wouldn't mind getting to see more of what's driving him to do stuff! I'm not saying FILL UP BRACKETS OF INTROSPECTION don't be like me but you know, a little bit more. Sometimes it feels like things are happening too fast in our meme threads, considering he's a bit of a tsundere too.

but like I said up there, I think you're IC! These are just some nitpicks since I saw your plurk asking for them and I tag with you semi-often - don't let it bring you down or anything. (｀・ω・´)

[sarah_sheep]

The grammar thing is a wip still since ngl my typing and over all formatting has gone down the drain, since I didn't take a very hard core English class this past year. Which has caused me to be, well informal isn't the right word but all over the place with a lot of stuff. The best way to phrase is I tend to type like I speak since I do more informal writing compared to more formatted works.

I've been trying to catch my self on habits I've been doing for awhile. I.e the run on sentence thing, separating words, and typing like I would speak normally. Which is something I have been trying to make a big effort on fixing for awhile now.

I do realize I need to put more inner thoughts in my tags. ._. Sorry about it seeming kinda boring. I think it's just a manner of I haven't played Okabe in a serious game setting in a little while so I'm kinda slipping with reactions and thoughts. Since I tend to view non-game tags as it's ok to be a little sloppy with replies (which is a bad idea really).