09. HMD meme

[k_squared_mods]

☑ HOW'S MY DRIVING MEME

All of us have those moments where we are uncertain about our characterization. Sometimes feedback is the best medicine! So, step on up and post your roleplay accounts and the games you have them in. Let others come by and tell you how you're doing and let others know what you think! Give legitimate reasons and not just "I love you!" Save that for our monthly love memes.


     » Anon is enabled but do not abuse it!
     » Don't circlejerk.
     » Flaming will not be tolerated, play nicely!
     » Remember to give critique

!PLEASE READ: There have been instances of anon bullying & threats in both the HMD and Love memes, so we wanted to stress how important it is that you bring this to us if it happens. Don't ignore something just because you think it's "too small" to bring to us.


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**The basic formatting of this meme was borrowed from hmd_me

Comments

[bloodbonds]

I just read through the posts in your Kariya journal, and I have to say that I enjoyed your prose style. It was especially fun how you kept Kariya's suffering intact despite the Pokemon setting, having the worms dormant, and seeing Rin and Sakura grown up and healthy.

For critique, maybe you could do without the small tag if the action is going to be more than a few lines of text? It would make it easier to read at a glance. And while I enjoy seeing long prose, there could be players that would appreciate a quick summary somewhere so they can tell the situation immediately and get straight to the tagging. Or maybe highlight/bold the main point of the post? Or maybe just stating it early like you did on the second post is enough.

Well, they're just some ideas I thought could help a bit, this being an HMD meme and all. I'm not that good or experienced in roleplaying, so take it with a grain of salt.

[sculpted]

Thank you for your comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading through Kariya's threads! He's a lot of fun to play.

I use the small tag for all of my RPing, just to show the distinct difference between action and dialogue. I personally find not using the small tag can make a post look quite cluttered with text, but that's just me! I can understand why you'd bring that up with Kariya's intro post, however; I know that was....ridiculously tl;dr, but I felt it was necessary in order to explain how he was going to end up in Route, with all those changes, etc etc. From his second post onward, I don't intend to flood the comm with that amount of pure suffering tl;dr, because it was a ridiculously huge amount, orz. It was a case of me having all these thoughts in my head for Kariya, and needing everyone, particularly his castmates and those familiar with the series, to know what his status was.

Don't discount yourself! I'm actually glad you brought that up, and I do appreciate it! I just wanted to clarify I'm usually that painfully tl;dr, it was just a moment of HERE ARE ALL THESE THOUGHTS AND FEELS TAKE THEM, ALL OF YOU

So again, thank you for your comment! :3b