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k_squared_mods ([personal profile] k_squared_mods) wrote in [community profile] love_hmd_meme2012-01-15 09:19 am
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04. HMD meme

☑ HOW'S MY DRIVING MEME


All of us have those moments where we are uncertain about our characterization. Sometimes feedback is the best medicine! So, step on up and post your roleplay accounts and the games you have them in. Let others come by and tell you how you're doing and let others know what you think! Give legitimate reasons and not just "I love you!" Save that for our monthly love memes.


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(Anonymous) 2012-01-16 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
She started off badly for this pairing  and it has continued on into her playing now. Even if we go back to her first few posts, she was doing the same thing that she has done in her previous game. No one has anything against her playing a pairing. This didn't even start until recently, either. But there is a very notable difference in how she was playing Ema then, and how she changed her for her pairing. She used to be silly, but closer to how we could see her behave in the situation she had come into. She's still a bit too nice for my tastes, but that was fine. 

As soon as the ship came in, Ema changed. Suddenly she was throwing herself at Shi-Long any time she got a chance. She was being much less like herself and being written in a way that would push her into being interesting to Lang. That is my problem. This could have believably been drawn out. Suddenly their age gap, their professionalism, is completely ignored for a hot fuck. I see the Shi-Long player interacting with a lot of other females, but Ema is trying for exclusivity. If it weren't so badly developed, it would have not even been a problem.

You have to be blind to not notice it, and I have already offered suggestions to improve, but with friends like you enabling her when she has slipped up, she isn't going to get very far.
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[personal profile] oyatatasama 2012-01-16 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm going to take a second to respond to this before the other one. I get the feeling you're confusing my slight shift in writing to match that of langs man for something else.when writing with het, especially when it comes to porn I try and keep it mote serious with the bit of silly I.always use when I play ema.

I may not have included it every chance I've gotten, but ema has always found Lang to be an attractive man. saying so however before they began sleeping together however REALLY would have lookwdd awkward and pairings pushy.

since emas return to the game if you check her logs she was actually exclusively sleeping with yukimura from samurai warriors. outside of curses she has always consistently slept with one person in her previous stay on the island it had been Vash the Stampede, but I never heard anyone complain about that. I don't think it too odd for her to seek out one person regularly and I am personally not comfortable having her sleep around a lot because I think it would be ooc and I have other characters that have different views of sex that would.

as it is, I do have some near future possibly collar loosening plans with ema, but I'd have to see the opinion on that one even with the development behind the basis for it if it goes that way.

worry not, I have more to say below that I will get too shortly, i wont he ignoring that
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[personal profile] oyatatasama 2012-01-16 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*langs mun. way to.go, phone. sarutobo strikes again.