Hello! I would like to stop by and say that your grammar and syntax should be looked at more closely. For example, when you say "than you should let me fight than" (in the thread with Sertoria in Animus) it doesn't come off as clearly as saying, "then, you should let me fight, then!"

Additionally, watching for double word or phrase usage is a good thing, too. Not every tag has to be speedy, which I think you suffer from that - quantity of tags over the quality of them.

I think that if you watch over this, you'd be that much better. I do enjoy RPing with you and hope that this improves the quality of your tags.