Okay, mostly I know your Jade, though I will say something about Rose - having played a bit with her, I like her. I think you have a good handle on her speech patterns, and I really have enjoyed reading her thus far.
OKAY JADE. I don't play in fac (yet), but. Sing!Jade. Is adorable. She's got depths and angst, but it's not OMG ALL YOU DO - it's touched on when appropriate, and the rest of the time, she's... a 14-year-old girl! She has fun, she helps her friends, she does sciencey things like she enjoys. Honestly, I'll admit I'm a very forgiving person as far as little things go, so I don't even know if I've seen anything that I'd critique, all I know is that when I think of Jade, I think of YOUR Jade.
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OKAY JADE. I don't play in fac (yet), but. Sing!Jade. Is adorable. She's got depths and angst, but it's not OMG ALL YOU DO - it's touched on when appropriate, and the rest of the time, she's... a 14-year-old girl! She has fun, she helps her friends, she does sciencey things like she enjoys. Honestly, I'll admit I'm a very forgiving person as far as little things go, so I don't even know if I've seen anything that I'd critique, all I know is that when I think of Jade, I think of YOUR Jade.
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