Vincent has gone through a lot in Kanna, some which I've been there and some which I've not. But I've always found it interesting that the way he deals with the worst of things now isn't the same unhealthy way he did in canon.
And there are times he truly acts powerless and others where he still fights and acts as if he does have power and can do something.
The imbalances that still exist seem pretty interesting to me. I'd love to see more expansion on just... feelings. I know there are a lot of them, especially with all the development but I would like a chance to see more inside of his head to see the changes that have and are happening there.
As for your writing, we all know I do adore your style.
Wow I don't know if that made any sense at all but this is me trying to be helpful sobsob
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And there are times he truly acts powerless and others where he still fights and acts as if he does have power and can do something.
The imbalances that still exist seem pretty interesting to me. I'd love to see more expansion on just... feelings. I know there are a lot of them, especially with all the development but I would like a chance to see more inside of his head to see the changes that have and are happening there.
As for your writing, we all know I do adore your style.
Wow I don't know if that made any sense at all but this is me trying to be helpful sobsob